Blog Post #4: Plans for Revision

I received a ton of useful feedback on my literature review from Dr. B, and I plan to begin revising by applying this feedback. I also need to figure out how to condense my literature review. I am not quite sure about how I want to format my methods within the research proposal, so it makes it a bit difficult to determine what parts of the literature review I feel are most important to include in the proposal. In order to further revise and condense the literature review, I will first decide how to format my methods in the proposal. It seems a bit daunting at the moment to try to put 12-15 pages together, but once I put the pieces together it might seem less overwhelming. Each time I am able to establish one piece of the project...it leads to the completion of another. For now, I will work on applying feedback and establishing what information is significant enough to keep and use. 

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  1. Rachel - ENGL 3341October 28, 2020 at 4:34 PM

    Getting help from Dr. B is always helpful to me. Even when I feel like I've got a great plan, somehow she flips it around and I get better focus for my topic. It's amazing how we get so close to our topic and sources that we can't see the short path ahead of us. I'm the exact same way. I had a brainstorming session a few days ago and that has made all the difference for how I will approach the proposal.

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